Kia ora Koloa. What an awesome story. I like the amount of detail you included and I enjoyed being able to make choices. Maybe you could add a 'the end' slide so that people don't end up clicking through the choices they didn't choose. And also the white writing is hard to read sometimes. You could change the colour of the writing or the colour of the background of the text box. Keep up the great work!
Kia ora Koloa. What an awesome story. I like the amount of detail you included and I enjoyed being able to make choices. Maybe you could add a 'the end' slide so that people don't end up clicking through the choices they didn't choose. And also the white writing is hard to read sometimes. You could change the colour of the writing or the colour of the background of the text box. Keep up the great work!
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